Peer review for short film

 

Hey, Bloggers! I'm not fully satisfied and finished with a little bit of filming. But to help me know what to work on I showed my friend, Olivia, and 2 of my sisters. 

Olivia liked it, so she said. She did say she could tell we were trying not the laugh, but we're not actors so lowkey expected. She liked the storyline, she thought it was really interesting. I'm glad she commented on the plot because I thought it was a little too cheesy.

My sisters had a bit too much to say. They don't really know wat they were talking about though. Like my oldest sister said "some of the shots are too far". That's expected though because we need shots like a long shot or medium long shot. My older sister, knows a little bit about the class so I could trust what she said. She commented on the lighting in some shots, said it was too dim. It kind of was when filming at Alyssa's house. Also it scenes with me and Alyssa, my head would be cut off, and she pointed that out. But it was lowkey more important to see her than me. The height difference also made it a harder. I'm like 7 inches or more taller than her. I'm trying to remember other things they said. Overall though it got pretty good reviews. They did said  should add a little bit more, which I am. Theres like two scenes I wanna re-film. It'll make the outcome but better.

I'll update y'all, but that's it for this one. Bye Bloggers!

Xoxo, Laudjah.